far away

belliwether · 发表于 2006-8-17 21:02:04

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>far away light a cigarette in the dim inn another false hope you give me this time in the mist of smoke in the mirror at the corner blooming flowers wither soon
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>swirling and swirling from moring to evening gloomy clouds covering the city whole 
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>down the mood rain with thunder Love exploded into splinter the pot under the eave now full of water but what has been drained inside my dotty mind ?
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凉夜 · 发表于 2006-8-17 21:19:31

我又晕了,~~~~~~~~~~~)))))呵呵

古鲁 · 发表于 2006-8-17 22:32:00

古鲁也只能“OK”了^.^

萤火虫 · 发表于 2006-8-17 23:43:26

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>but what has been drained inside my dotty mind ?——
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>sorry,i don't know .

曾蒙 · 发表于 2006-8-18 18:05:11

提!

黑昼 · 发表于 2006-8-19 02:08:33

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>我可以读懂大概，这首诗在抒发个人感情，时间的流逝down the mood，rain with thunder关注了当下的现实，作者抽烟，看云飘过天空，很空旷的感觉。觉得很不错，但还可以更具体一点。胡言乱语，勿怪。

黑昼 · 发表于 2006-8-25 15:38:17

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>提。一直关注老弟，多努力

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