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[原创]再发一组:加速到什么程度才能跟上你

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发表于 2005-12-12 20:59:16 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<DIV class=Section1 style="LAYOUT-GRID:  15.6pt none"><FONT face="Times New Roman"><o:p>加速到什么程度才能跟上你(诗7首)        胡仁泽</o:p></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV class=Section1 style="LAYOUT-GRID:  15.6pt none"><FONT face="Times New Roman"><o:p>“我是一个兵,来自<br>老百姓”战争年代的歌声<br>在抹平的弹坑上长出美味的蘑菇<br>潮湿的七月过去<br>老百姓更名为市民,市区宽敞的大街上<br>美女完成席梦思上佯睡的行为艺术<br>竹林被风吹响,从郊外传来<br>夕阳里竹林更响 , 秘密的睡眠<br>暗自推近<br>此时,是算命先生所称的酉时<br>一个士兵捧起酒坛<br>灌下清泉,仗剑而歌<br>帐篷外<br>我是个醉生梦死的人<br>伸出的双手<br>抓住了什么,骨节吱吱响动<br>唱歌的人都睡去</o:p></FONT></DIV><FONT face="Times New Roman"><o:p>
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<DIV class=Section1 style="LAYOUT-GRID:  15.6pt none">各式笔记本,我最喜欢<br>活页的那种,末尾一页<br>可作第一页<br>向后转,后队作前队<br>行进,从活页孔里穿过的<br>空气与其它处的<br>你嗅嗅,有何不同<br>蓝色的天空,黑色的天空<br>它们之间<br>空气逼进的压缩饼干<br>伸出腿脚<br>为一场战争打气<br>计划某日某时攻下阵地<br>目标在哪里,看见了吗</DIV>
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<DIV class=Section1 style="LAYOUT-GRID:  15.6pt none">喇叭裤变成直筒裤<br>直筒裤变成超短裙<br>大街塞下不易消化的食物<br>还有一拨身着黑衣<br>高高的领口遮住了一张张脸<br>但脚步开始乱了、人散了<br>你向前、向后<br>七月和十月在翘翘板的两端<br>十月在空中晃成了一月<br>挤宽的马路上呵,怎么找不到你<br>马躲在马厩里落了半槽泪<br>你何时丢失,或已死去</DIV>
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<DIV class=Section1 style="LAYOUT-GRID:  15.6pt none">穿针引线的时刻<br>你将双眼紧闭<br>郊外的竹林里,萤火虫扮成鬼火<br>一盏鬼火节约了一盏灯<br>月下一位老人还在穿针走线<br>起端,末尾,中间晃动的<br>一滴露水呵,它是血<br>坠弯了一个人的腰<br>老人的指头已磨成铁器<br>铮亮的光,刺痛你的眼皮</DIV>
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<DIV class=Section1 style="LAYOUT-GRID:  15.6pt none"><br>&lt;&lt;加速到什么程度才能跟上你&gt;&gt;</DIV>
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<DIV class=Section1 style="LAYOUT-GRID:  15.6pt none"><br>“每天赶去上班,早上<br>7:47分左右,像攻克阵地般坚决”<br>你一直这样,闹钟的齿轮<br>与自行车的飞轮如出一辙<br>办公桌上的回行针里程序与蜘蛛同谋<br>繁琐、简单、重复、完成<br>接听电话也需保持<br>礼貌,为此要对自己微笑<br>精确得模糊,不能让<br>故障出现于此<br>节约一次次口水,发电<br>维系自己的运转<br>和平衡<br>一架七四七飞机飞过屋顶<br>空中那条美丽的弧线,女飞行员呵<br>我的运转加速到什么程度<br>才能跟上你</DIV>
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<DIV class=Section1 style="LAYOUT-GRID:  15.6pt none"><br>这座不大的城市最后开通的<br>第5路公交车<br>乘车人少得可怜,上上下下<br>显得他们都懂礼貌<br>在起点站<br>我登上5路车,说<br>到终点站,售票员提醒这里就是<br>“嗯”<br>比起1路、2路、3路、4路车<br>它算是慢的,是广告这条狗<br>撵着它,一圈又一圈地跑<br>驴子都会识路<br>坐车的人容易肥胖<br>胖子会多吃掉汽油。电动自行车的<br>刹车声吓跑小贩<br>有人正用钢刷香蕉水<br>对付牛皮癣,违法的老鼠<br>被追打,车头吼出金属的声音<br>“把你告上被告席”</DIV>
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<DIV class=Section1 style="LAYOUT-GRID:  15.6pt none">    &lt;&lt;隐身者之歌&gt;&gt;</DIV>
<DIV class=Section1 style="LAYOUT-GRID:  15.6pt none"><br>我用上辈子<br>褪去身上的彩衣<br>好在这辈子能穿上这身<br>枯叶的衣衫<br>与彩蝴蝶相遇退避的会是谁<br>当我喊着自己的名字<br>——枯叶蝶时<br>发抖的声音加速了飞翔<br>累了就停驻在<br>叶叶相叠的枯叶之上,听见<br>喋喋不休的饲养员<br>走出动物园</DIV>
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<DIV class=Section1 style="LAYOUT-GRID:  15.6pt none">写于2005年9—10月<br></o:p></FONT></DIV>
[此贴子已经被作者于2005-12-12 21:19:36编辑过]
发表于 2005-12-12 21:12:55 | 显示全部楼层
节奏还可明亮些
发表于 2005-12-12 21:53:14 | 显示全部楼层
<>说实话,写的不怎么好。但关于活页前面作后面后面也可做前面的日常经验我感到很亲切。诗歌能够恢复一些人的记忆也很好啊。</P>
<>我才不听哪个的意见呢,我又不想当作家——这是马力的签名,舒服啊,送给您</P>
发表于 2005-12-13 12:54:28 | 显示全部楼层
欢迎新朋友!
发表于 2005-12-14 21:59:44 | 显示全部楼层
喜欢《某一天》《某事》
发表于 2005-12-17 22:49:31 | 显示全部楼层
喜欢,提上去:)
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