[原创]恋人的季节（组诗）

严立真

<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'"><font color="#000000"><br/><font size="3"><font color="#ff00ff">我首先声明：我不是诗人，我写诗是随心所欲地乱写，心里怎么想我就怎么写，我不懂诗歌章法，只是因为自己喜欢读诗歌，在读到喜欢的诗歌时就有灵感了，有灵感了我就写了这些东西。<br/></font>在深圳</font></font></span></b></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'"><font color="#000000" size="3">文/严立真</font></span></b></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><font color="#000000"><font size="3"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'">当工厂的机器声与城市的灯火等待黎明的到来</span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"></span></b></font></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><font color="#000000"><font size="3"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'">深圳的天空，比乞丐的呻吟还要无力</span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"></span></b></font></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><font color="#000000"><font size="3"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'">几个打工者拖着崭新的密码箱，疲备地走过人行道</span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"></span></b></font></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000"></font></span></b><font size="3">&nbsp;</font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><font color="#000000"><font size="3"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'">没有田野，便没有农民的田园牧歌</span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"></span></b></font></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><font color="#000000"><font size="3"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'">没有森林，便没有鸟儿的自然啁啾</span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"></span></b></font></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><font color="#000000"><font size="3"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'">道旁光秃的椰王树，剌痛我的心</span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"></span></b></font></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000"></font></span></b><font size="3">&nbsp;</font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><font color="#000000"><font size="3"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'">是我的双手使我活着，是深圳</span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"></span></b></font></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><font color="#000000"><font size="3"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'">使我到达我被失去的地点</span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"></span></b></font></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><font color="#000000" size="3"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'">记忆，但不再留下犁痕</span></b></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000"></font></span></b><font size="3">&nbsp;</font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><font color="#000000"><font size="3"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'">苦难、耻辱，是我的地址</span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"></span></b></font></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><font color="#000000"><font size="3"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'">整个深圳，没有一个女人不苦闷</span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"></span></b></font></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><font color="#000000"><font size="3"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'">整个深圳，容不下我的自豪</span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"></span></b></font></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000"></font></span></b><font size="3">&nbsp;</font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><font color="#000000"><font size="3"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'">从发丝的污垢里隐藏着的泥土，我</span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"></span></b></font></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><font color="#000000"><font size="3"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'">认出自己的故乡</span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"></span></b></font></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" class="MsoNormal" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #404040; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;'"><font color="#000000" size="3">已被打进一个小包裹，远远寄走……<br/><br/></font></span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; COLOR: #404040" lang="EN-US"><font size="3">&nbsp; </font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: red; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">温暖</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: red; FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></b></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">当门前的小路被白雪覆盖</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">离乡的游子就要回家了</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">每当小路上的白雪被行人踏破</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">我便听到了无数的问候声</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">热泪化作相拥</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">无论说与不说</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">我都感到一种无言的温暖</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">弥漫在我的内心深处</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p><br/><font size="3">&nbsp; </font>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: red; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">我们</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: red; FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></b></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">一朵朵的孤云，在空中</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">随风飘荡</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">谁也无法预知风</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">最终将它吹到何方</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">一片片无根的漂萍</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">在激流里，飞流翻滚</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">谁也无法断定</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">它到底会漂到哪块田间</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">长江的大浪</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">拥挤着朝大海奔腾</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">激起道道漩涡，片片浪花</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">却不知道哪条沟洫是其归宿</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">一道道闪电</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">朝黑夜急急剌去</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">但谁也说不清</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">谁能在黎明闪耀</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">这就是我们</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">迷惘地活在人间的我们</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">不知道为何而来</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">也不知道将要何去</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p><br/><br/><font size="3">&nbsp; </font>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: red; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">忘不了</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: red; FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></b></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">由于我背弃了诺言</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">你与别人走进了婚姻的殿堂</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">但每当我与死神相遇</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">每当孤独把我死死囚禁</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">每当我爬上睡眠的顶峰</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">我就突然遇见了你</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p><br/><font size="3">&nbsp; </font>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: red; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">虚</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: red; FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></b></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">你做过很多梦</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">梦里尽是伟大的理想</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">你往脑海灌输</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">伟人的信念</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">他们劝你相信</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">今天我写下你的故事</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">是对还是错</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">都无所谓</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">故事有人读我开心</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">劝你相信伟大理想的人</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">如果再来</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt"> </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">决不接待</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p><br/><font size="3">&nbsp; </font>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: red; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">我的人生是一块天然的土地</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: red; FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></b></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">我的人生是一块天然的土地</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">这块原本属于我自己的土地</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">却被他们剥夺了我播种的自由</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">在我不幸的人生旅途中</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">他们不断地播下愚昧和灾难的种子</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">迫使我收获邪恶和苦难的果实</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p><br/><font size="3">&nbsp; </font>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: red; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">恋人的季节</span><span style="COLOR: red" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">爱神啊，是时候了。春天盛极一时。</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">把你的温情融入太阳里吧！</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">让风吹醒冬眠的山川。</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">让枝头开出希望的花朵；</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">再给黑夜两天明媚的月光，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">唤醒恋人的浪漫，把</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">最美的情感酿成甘美的烈酒，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">迷醉所有恋人的神志。</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">谁此时没有财产，不必再去谋取，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">谁此时孤独，就永远孤独，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">迷醉的恋人，写长长的情信，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">用最美的语言唤来至爱的恋人。</font></span></p><br/><br/><font size="3">&nbsp; </font>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: red; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">汶川</span><span style="COLOR: red" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">汶川，当孩子在朗朗地读书，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">当林间的鸟儿在欢快地啁啾，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">那是你最幸福的时刻。</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">当你在颤抖的大地里醒来，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">别怕地震的魔爪</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">和死神的狂啸。</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">你受伤的脚步，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">走进的不是黑夜而是黎明，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">那里有我们向你伸来的助手。</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">一堵堵断垣残壁，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">那里依然有你重生的希望，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">汶川啊，你是坚强的。</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">你是我们的血和肉，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">我们的心与你同在，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">我们的灾难，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">只是黎明前的故事。</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="3">&nbsp;</font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">当太阳升起，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">汶川，我们坚信，</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New"><font size="3">你会再次穿上美丽的新装。</font></span></p></span></b>

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游太平

这模仿得也太明显了吧

严立真

<p>形式一样，内容不一样。<br/>写诗都是从模仿开始的，只要不抄袭就行。<br/>深圳和英格兰的不同<br/>祖国和故乡的不同<br/>工厂与烟囱的不同<br/>……<br/>发丝和指甲的不同<br/>相同的是那份客在异乡的愁绪<br/>我这个在祖国深圳的异乡人，很羡慕在国外英格兰的异乡人，因为他没有苦难。<br/>当我第一次阅读到多多那首《在英格兰》，我心里浮现的不是“英格兰”而是“深圳”，所以我一气就模仿它的形式写了“深圳”。<br/><br/></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2009-8-10 21:38:14编辑过]

严立真

<p>[em50]<br/>请大家批评指正！</p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2009-8-10 23:01:19编辑过]

陈建

&nbsp;加油吧！<br/><br/>多读多写——适当造反！

严立真

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>陈建</i>在2009-8-11 18:49:17的发言：</b><br/>&nbsp;加油吧！<br/><br/>多读多写——适当造反！ </div>
<p>多谢鼓励！<br/>我读诗歌是吃点心，喜欢读，但不喜欢多读，写诗只是玩儿。<br/>我想就你的话补充一些话。<br/>你的话有一定的道理，但我觉得真正要想把诗歌写好首先要将诗歌的各类形式和派别的常识搞懂，比如格律诗，自由诗，十四行诗，叙事诗，抒情诗，讽刺诗，朦胧诗派，后朦胧诗派等等，然后再多读多写才有用，否则光读诗歌是无法了解诗歌。<br/></p>

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