桑眉：《良人属于我》外二

桑眉

<p><strong>《软肋》</strong></p>
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<p>那根软肋我要捡回来</p>
<p>猩红热式的情感很危险</p>
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<p>十八岁那年没曾发生的故事</p>
<p>三十八岁时怎能上演</p>
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<p>像笼鸟醒在不同的清晨</p>
<p>像枯叶蝶坠向各自的深渊</p>
<p>“我们的劫数呵，无法替代或交换。”</p>
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<p>但如果我们说再见</p>
<p>秒针必迈不过时钟精密的机心</p>
<p>＂滴答＂声如同婴啼</p>
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<p>2009/06/21/17：21成都。</p>
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<p><strong>《命，或劫数》</strong></p>
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<p>无法刺探的边境我据有了许久</p>
<p>还将继续把守</p>
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<p>比爱情更难的临门叫阵的</p>
<p>不容人退避</p>
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<p>……擂鼓、酣战、末世英雄一样狂啸</p>
<p>一而再再而三……</p>
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<p>这是命。军师对我耳语</p>
<p>他遇见我之前是江湖术士</p>
<p>我是神仙</p>
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<p>我们堕为尘埃，如此冥顽</p>
<p>只为阵前一同赴难？</p>
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<p>2009/06/26中午，邻水。</p>
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<div style="DISPLAY: inline"><font size="3">——我离世你会悲伤么？</font></div></div>
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<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font color="#000000">1<font face="宋体">、</font></font></span></p>
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<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">我离世你悲伤么？</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">我是你骨中骨、肉中肉，我们一体*</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><font color="#000000">&nbsp;<wbr><wbr>&nbsp;<wbr><wbr></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">默认或拒绝都在掌握中。</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">那之后，时光把我们放回梦中</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">天黑下来我就去找你</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">拥抱亲吻温存</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">成为你眼中那滴水</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><font color="#000000">&nbsp;<wbr><wbr></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">像露珠回到天上，或者跌入草窠</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font color="#000000">——<font face="宋体">当泪水滑落那一刻你学会通灵</font></font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">我独自的秘密从此两个人分享</font></span></p>
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<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font color="#000000">2<font face="宋体">、</font></font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><font color="#000000">&nbsp;<wbr><wbr></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">白云在黄河上空行走时</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">很慢很忧伤，像生灵在命运中</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">像你，在我内心</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">风无有止境</font></span></p>
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<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">风在我们的窗棂上摸索一生</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">擦干净每一块玻璃，或者拍碎</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">幸福很疼痛很晶莹</font></span></p>
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<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font color="#000000">3<font face="宋体">、</font></font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><font color="#000000">&nbsp;<wbr><wbr></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">你会游泳吗？</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">在水里睁着眼睛</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><font color="#000000">&nbsp;<wbr><wbr></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">在另一个世界看清彼此的脸孔多么不易</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">我们要反复练习</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">呼吸或接吻</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">你要学会在水里噙住眼泪</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">听清我最后一句人类的语言</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><font color="#000000">&nbsp;<wbr><wbr></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">并且记下约定</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000">是的，你什么时候来都可以</font></span></p>
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<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font color="#000000">4、</font></span></p>
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<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font color="#000000">下一秒开始倒退着赶路</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">与某人保持一万匹马也无法拉近的距离</span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt">&nbsp;<wbr></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">日光渐淡　风声鹤唳</span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">我会慢慢学会如何穿越沼泽地</span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">不被沾满泥浆的手捉拿</span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">我会绕过生前没能绕过的芦苇荡、桥、红绸……</span></p>
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<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">要不要饮下去？桥头那碗汤。</span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">你说　</span></p>
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<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">5、</span></p>
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<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">怎么就走不下去呢</span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">怎么就不走下去呢</span></p>
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<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">在桥头哭泣的假惺惺的</span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">是命令我去死的前世的人</span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">在桥头寂默的凄凄然的</span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">是希望我活着的来世的人</span></p>
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<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">哪个是你？</span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">冤家啊，冤家路窄。</span></span></p>
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<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">6、</span></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt">&nbsp;<wbr></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">从此不再调制过期的椴树蜜</span></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">和眼看要过保质期的咖啡</span></span></p>
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<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">蓝色陶瓷杯某人会用滚烫的水冰镇的水</span></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">或者用手碎掉</span></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">像捣毁去往天光沐照那条秘密栈道</span></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt">&nbsp;<wbr></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">不要悲伤，或者宛惜　</span></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">（如果你会遗憾会想念）</span></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">就此离散了</span></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">骨与肉　</span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">我与你</span></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt">&nbsp;<wbr></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt">&nbsp;<wbr></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">2009／4／19前三节，6／20后三节。于成都。</span></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">*源自《圣经》。</span></span></p></div></div>

[此贴子已经被作者于2009-7-8 9:20:44编辑过]

曾蒙

<p>我们堕为尘埃，如此冥顽</p>
<p>只为阵前一同赴难？</p>

白鹤林

<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000"><em>你会游泳吗？</em></font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font face="宋体" color="#000000"><em>在水里睁着眼睛</em></font></span></p>
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<p>这是孤独，更是记忆……</p>

甘文良

<p>这类悲情的还是少一点的好。</p>
<p>生活还是多一些美好。</p>

八零

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>甘文良</i>在2009-7-9 16:02:44的发言：</b><br/>
<p>这类悲情的还是少一点的好。</p>
<p>生活还是多一些美好。</p></div>
<p>诗歌和生活是两码事</p>
<p>你说的有理</p>
<p>可我觉得，评论诗歌，不必这样偏离</p>

桑眉

<p>80护着桑眉呢：）说得有理。记得阿桑有首歌的歌词：谁说的，人非要快乐不可/好象快乐由得人选择…… </p>
<p>老甘提醒得也有理。只是我最大的毛病在于：欢乐时不成诗。好在最近写得少，悲情的诗自然成比例递减。</p>
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<p>一并问好曾蒙、白鹤林等诗友！</p>

王子俊

<p>还是喜欢甘文良的那几组诗，语言干干净净。诗嘛，别整这么凄惨啊！</p>

桑眉

<p><font face="Verdana">呵呵，稍安。我也喜欢老甘的。</font>自己的呢则敝帚自珍。</p>
<p>各位周末快快！</p>

黄元祥

站个位置学习！

dazhongge

<p>赞一个，深情眷眷的诗 ........</p>
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