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川沙诗歌《黛湖一样的秋风》赏析(2)

  黛湖一样的秋风
  ——在尼斯湖给黛湖
  
  1995年秋 苏格兰 爱丁堡
  
  黛湖一样的秋风
  黛湖一样的秋风哦!
  黛湖一样的秋风里没有你这尼斯湖底连到大
  西洋深处的海腥
  黛湖一样的秋风哦!
  黛湖一样的秋风里没有大西洋海底冰寒的冷流
  黛湖一样的秋风里没有夜晚浮到水面月光下痛
  哭的大西洋鲑鱼银头彩虹鳟鱼金目鱼月目
  鱼银鲈鱼狼鱼CiscoWalleye
  Sauger Rock Bass那些嘤嘤
  嘤嘤的凄泣
  
  黛湖一样的秋风里没有深不见底的蓝眼睛
  黛湖一样的秋风里飘着松林竹笋菊花的清芳
  黛湖一样的秋风里漾溢着甜甜的山泉的温馨
  黛湖一样的秋风里叽叽喳喳喧哗着草鱼白鲢鱼
  香鱼柳条鱼面条鱼青蛙癞哈妈嘻嘻哈哈
  在水面的戏耍打闹
  
  黛湖一样的秋风
  黛湖一样的秋风哦!
  黛湖一样的秋风吹出
  黛湖一样那个秋天的你
  
  黛湖一样那个秋天的你的身姿
  黛湖一样的你的那个秋天的笑靥
  黛湖一样那个秋天黛湖的镜面
  黛湖一样那个秋天湖面波光粼粼
  黛湖一样那个秋天湖边树林青草花朵上挂
  满颗颗亮晶晶的雨滴
  黛湖一样那个秋天湖边溪沟汩汩流动你的
  脸颊腮边的泪花
  黛湖一样那个秋天湖面青波上漂满红叶
  黛湖一样那个秋天湖面青波上漂满的红叶
  都是你唇上的口红
  黛湖一样那个秋天我的脸颊就是满满的一
  湖青波荡漾
  黛湖一样那个秋天我依傍在那座青青葱葱
  松涛低徊不语的晋云山麓悄悄沉眠
  
  黛湖一样的秋风
  黛湖一样的秋风哦!
  此夜此刻
  湖那边
  彭斯*听见
  我在哭!
  
  (原载川沙诗选集《春夜集》)
  
  l* 彭斯(Robert Burns)苏格兰著名诗人
  
  Autumn Wind From Dye Lake  
  composed beside Loch Ness
  
  Autumn wind from Dye Lake,
  Oh, Dye Lake!
  Wind that does not smell like the deep Atlantic Ocean,
  Oh, autumn wind from Dye Lake!
  There, there is no cold current as found in the Atlantic,
  no creatures raising their heads above the surface of the water,
  piteously weeping at the moon —— walleyes, rock bass,
  rainbow trout, silver perches, and
  flounders … 
  In the autumn wind from Dye Lake,
  there are no fathomless blue eyes,
  but the fragrance flows, smelling of chrysanthemum,
  bamboo shoots, and pine trees.
  Mountain brooks meander pleasantly,
  where silver carps, grass carps,
  other fish and frogs,
  play and laugh,
  full of noisy fun.
  Autumn wind from Dye Lake,
  Oh, Dye Lake!
  The wind blows you out of that autumn,
  the Dye Lake autumn.
  You looked just like the autumn Dye Lake,
  you smiled just like the autumn Dye Lake,
  upon the mirror-like water
  rippling gently.
  Rain drops hung on flowers, grass and trees,
  tears dripped down your cheeks, into the brook beside the lake.
  The colour of the maple leaves upon the surface
  matched the lipstick you wore.
  My autumn face rippled in the clear, pure water.
  I lingered, lost in the pinewoods of the silent mountain.
  Autumn wind from Dye Lake,
  Oh, Dye Lake!
  Tonight, this moment,
  by the lake,
  Robert Burns hears me
  Crying!
  
  (原载《川沙诗歌精品赏析》 河北教育出版社2010年出版)

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